Members Kace Posted March 7, 2011 Members Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Here is the poem I alluded to in the "Workout" thread. It's freeform prose with a bit of alliteration thrown in for sparkle. All apologies to ee cummings. I can close my eyes and still relive that day and the 5 hours we were in each others arms. C'est la vie. -----------------------------------FlutterQuiet early morning, a weekend - for sleeping in!Alarm clock conspicuously absent numb groggy fog dispelled.Yet how squirmy my thoughts and how languid my drive Awake! Yawn.Streeeeeetch... Remember, smile.A someone awaits - Promise of undiscovered bliss near in the dawn air.Effervescent elated flips, capricious smile.Greets to you bewitching goddess desiredSoused not of spirits but by spirited being.Amidst the fuzzy warmth of chilled mimosas how (ful)filled are weBoundless still this old friendship swelling smolderingly underneathWe dance sans moving, wield words in eversocrafty waysCatching up to the time displaced - many memories bubbling new ones made.Trek short anticipation longWords fail to say as they're wont to doPassions rekindle flames never wholly snuffed outAnd how wonderfully new this all is!So familiar yet new territory, new sights, new smells, gentle sighsLonging for you never ended but now is more beginningHow long has it been? Too long, m'dear.Hands sliding, lips gliding, breathless gazes bartered, senses free!Alight with you follow fly on with me no wings neededNot sure where we are but exactly where we should beOh flutter! Fierce howl inside this animal need, wanting, bursting at the seams!Wait.Settle down boy! Calmly, no rush to enjoy. Savor this moment we are ours for a day.Fingertips gently caressing past rosy cheekDown delicate valley between twin magnificent peaksNever known coquetry now childlike wonder exploresSilky the skin, gleeful the grin, overflow sensation, WILD againLick pop circle suck squeeeeeeze - a gasp!Lengthy look that says "Yes, please."Quickened beating though metered pace further southA whiff, sweat salty glistening, a whisper, come hither...Cute button! Ha ha! Mercurial nips across the surface.Beckoning beyond satin womanfur so curlycue black beautiful <tickle> <giggle>Up to green pools so deeply alive to gaze into you meHeat. Steamy moistness secret place, sacred spaceMorning dew for honey smooth petals of light darkEnfolded at the point of origin inviting within.Mmm loitering loins nicelyRaising the sail to catch the windNot quite yetTease in electric arc licks flicker fickle flaming tongue wispsWhirling dervishes, graceful motion and arching spine, curving hipsCrimson complexion purple hues aching breath.Begging muscle pleading twitch and soon butNo, not yet.Careful brushing of velvet aside lovingly delighted at the passageGentle pressure guiding where I cannot followTender shudders serene quakes through my consumingFevered tempo beats lashing nerves tingly and taut tightly woundFiddle strings and bow plucked playfully nimble in rhythm to the body topicRagged gasping silent criesOh yes m'dear, now.Tension snaps - slack crisp new scorching blushCresting tide crashing into shores unstoppableReleased exhortation to a god that isn't there but laughs in joy nonethelessHow sweet the shudder and clench to crush the agent of attentions lavishedLovingly ripple tense break beyond to float to fluffy earthA firecracker spent - price paid hundredfold at such a precious viewAt ease you are Into me so as I into you.Flutter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WendyNY Posted March 7, 2011 Members Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 I am completely speechless ---To say you are gifted is a complete understatement . How absolutely beautiful and so eloquently written. Thank you so much for sharing this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Kace Posted March 7, 2011 Author Members Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Thanks. I give her the credit for this one, I merely channeled it all into words. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Review Team sass Posted March 9, 2011 Review Team Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 Very nice, thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WendyNY Posted March 11, 2011 Members Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 Just curious---do you have more poems you've written ?? This one was so unbelievably good !! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Kace Posted March 11, 2011 Author Members Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 Flutter is the only erotic poetry I've written so far and that's been years ago. I wrote a poem about a painful breakup with a different girl in college who I'd been with for only 2 weeks. I've long since lost it but I recall it was a description of a rose and how soft and beautiful it is on the surface but reaching for it will make you bleed. Yes, it was depressing and dripping with self-pity. I've got words for another poem bouncing around my head but it's not particularly erotic either. I can send it to you if you like once it's done. I want to experiment with iambic pentameter as a nod to old Shakespeare. I think the poem is going to be an allegory about the implicit disposability of the male gender using Atlas as the primary figure. Not sexy, but cathartic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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