Luvcock

To Forum Peeps,

I wrote 3 sexual short stories back in August. 

(under stories section)

They were the first and only times I have ever written . I thought it seemed I had a talent for XXX writing.  If y'all have time, please read one (or all 3).  Give me feedback on whether it turned you on, or sidetracked too much.  What did you like about it, what would you change? 

Finally , is there any need for writers?  I find it easy and feel I could improve with more practice. Would love imput...male and female.  

Thanks