Cavelady854

Wow great story, and so well written! Very hot. Nice details. I am very jealous right now of you. I hope your honeymoon went well.

Holy cow that was hot! I was bouncing up and down in my chair, just reading it! Wow! Very well written. Great job.

I recently went to Philly for the weekend. (I went with the girlfriend who is now my ex-girlfriend.) She got pissed at me and left me at a club, at 1:30 in the morning, 45 blocks from the hotel, with no money, no id, and no hotel card key. (We were sharing a purse and she took off with it.) The guy we were hanging out with was a local and knew the way back to the hotel, and since I had no clue where I was and had no money, he was forced to walk me back. Well, I had no problem with him walking me back. (He was this fine brother, with a great smile, and so sweet!) We were both little drunk, and he started to tell me that even though he had come for my girlfriend, I had captured his attention. We ended up making out an hour later, on the steps of a building in an alley way. He was so big! I moaned while his hand was in my pants, and my mouth was around his hard member. We both came at the same time. He walked me until we were two blocks from the hotel, at a bus stop where he had to catch a bus back the way we came. Even though it started out crappy, the night ended up very cool.

Very hot, and wow jealous.

I agree with sun flower. This is one of my favorites too. Very hot. Very good.

It made me cry a little it was so well written. Very romantic. Glad he is home.

Very hot and very good. Great job.

I think i might make this a multiple part series. I hope you like it. The sound of a gunshot echoes through the night. A woman screams, and then her high-heeled shoes clatter down the dark alley, as she runs for her life. A man is chasing her as she darts form street to street. Thinking fast, the woman ditches her loud shoes, and runs barefooted through the darkened streets. Losing sight of her attacker, the woman quickly hides behind a dumpster. She quakes with fear, as she peeks over the top of the garbage. She can barely scream, before her attacker slips a hand with a napkin and chloroform over her mouth. The woman struggles for a moment, before going limp in his arms. The man grunts, as he lifts the woman up and tosses her over his shoulder, and disappears into the approaching fog. * * * * * “I want my sister found!” I say as I slam my hand down on the detective’s desk. “Miss St. Claire, please calm down. We are doing everything we can do to find your sister,” the gruff, yet somewhat attractive detective sitting across from me, says quietly. I shake my head to deny the hot thoughts that flash through my brain about him, …about clearing his desk, …. spreading my legs wide… I shake my head in denial, again. A strong hand reaches forward and touches mine on the desk. “Don’t worry. We will find your sister.” Detective Jack O’Bannon’s warm green eyes flash, as he notices my plunging neckline, seeing just a brief flash of my light blue satin bra. Detective O’Bannon clears his throat, before he continues, “The ransom note says that you must pay two million dollars, in order to get her back.” “I don’t have that kind of money!” I say, starting to get upset. “We are doing everything we can, Miss St. Claire.” Detective O’Bannon says. I put my hand over his and say, “Please, call me Jodi,” with a soft smile. “Then you must call me Jack,” he replies with a grin. I cross my legs, as just that quick grin, brings heat to pool deep inside me. I make polite chat with the detective, as my mind races with hot sweaty thoughts about the man in front of me. Damn, I think to myself, I really need to get laid. I stand up suddenly, interrupting the detective in mid sentence. I need to either leave this place right now, or jump the hot detective. Even though my sister should be more important, the way the detective was looking at me, I think that he would have chose option two. I unconsciously lick my lips, as I see the interesting bulge in his pants. His focus turns to my mouth, as he watches my pink tongue, as it slides over my darker pink lip gloss. I slowly walk around the office, pausing to pull down each of the yellowing blinds at each window. Before I turn and face the detective, I lock his office door. “Um, .... what are you doing?” Jack asks me. I smile before I slowly start to unbutton my top. He gulps, as the top of my milky white breasts are exposed. “Miss St. Claire, I.... I... mean Jodi, what are you doing?” he says to me. “I just want to make sure you pay special attention to my sister's case, that's all.” I say finishing up the buttons on my blouse, exposing my light blue satin bra, and tossing the shirt behind me. “I assure you, we are going to do... to do...” he interrupts himself with a groan, as I take off my bra, and raise his hands to my breasts. I gasp as he grips them hard, the large double D's overflowing his strong hands. Suddenly his demeanor changes, as he pulls me roughly to him, and starts grinding his hard cock against me. I gasp, as I feel how big it is, even through both of our pants. Just as I imagined he would, he shoves all the stuff off his desk to the floor in one dramatic swoop. Then he takes me in his arms, kissing me frantically, and sitting me on top of his desk. I kiss him, pushing my tongue into his mouth, as he grips my ass. I take his shirt and rip it open, buttons flying in all directions. I gasp, as I run my fingers over his hard chest. It's his turn to gasp, as my fingers trace the tattoo on his stomach, nearing ever closer to his eager cock. He leans in close to whisper in my ear, “Do you want my hard cock in your pussy? Do you want me to fuck that tight little pussy until you scream and cry my name?” as he grinds his cock against me, and nibbles on my ear. I bite my lip, before I reply shakily, “Oh fuck yeah, mmmmm,” as I unbuckle his pants. Like a wild man, he unzips my pants and quickly takes them off, tossing them out into the office. He quickly puts a hand between my legs to see if I am wet and ready for him. He plays around a bit with my juices, as I start to moan and grind against his hand. He moves his hand and replaces it with his cock. He lays me down onto my back, across the desk. He braces himself, with his hands on the desk, as he starts a slow rhythm. I wrap my legs around his thrusting hips, holding onto his shoulders. “You like this big cock in you tight pussy, bitch? Mmmm yeah, you feel so fucking hot,” he grunts. “Oh yeah, fuck that pussy! Yeah!” I start to moan as he fucks his hard cock in and out, pressing me hard into the desk. My large breasts rub up and down his strong chest, as his hard cock plows through my slick channel. He leans down, so he can penetrate deeper into my pussy, and to suck my neck. I tangle my fingers in his hair, as he grazes his teeth across my throbbing pulse. He stands up and takes his cock out of my pussy. I whimper at the withdrawal, feeling the loss acutely. Then he flips me over onto my stomach, and spreads my legs wide. I let out a wail as he enters my pussy from behind. He spanks my ass, and I squeal at the pleasure/pain of it. He spanks it one more time before he starts fucking me again. He pulls my hair, causing me to arch my back and jut out my large breasts. He reaches around and teases the nipples, as I moan. He grunts and growls like an animal, as he covers my back like one. “Do you like this cock in your pussy, bitch? Do you want me to fuck you harder?” he growls in my ear, as he lays over my back to get in deeper. “Oh yes!” I moan in reply. “Beg for it, slut,” he sneers. “Please, Jack! Please fuck me harder with your big cock! Oh god yeah!” I moan into the desk. He picks up the pace, slamming me hard into the desk, as I claw at it to escape the intense pleasure he is creating with his cock. No real words are coming out of my mouth, by now, just mindless gibberish. The drawers in the desk are making noise, as the rattle, and he groans he pistons his cock in and out. We are making so much noise now, that someone is pounding on the door to the detective's office. Not caring about the other people, Jack whispers to me, “Are you close? Cum with me, baby.” “Yes! OH GOD, Jack! Yes!” I say as I cum with one of the biggest orgasms in my life all over his hard cock. He continues to pump in and out until my pussy is done spasming, then he withdraws his cock and moans, as he pumps it with a tight fist. He groans my name, as his cock spurts it's hot sticky cum onto my back, mixing with the fine sheen of sweat already there. When his cock is finally milked dry, Jack collapses backwards into his chair. I remain draped over his desk, as we pant at the same pace. Finally, Jack notices that someone is banging on the door, and asking if we are ok in here. He shouts that everything is fine, as we start to hurriedly get our clothes back on. Unfortunately, Jack's shirt was missing quite a few buttons, so he had to put his jacket back on. Before he goes to open the door, I plant one last fiery kiss on him, before I straighten my clothes and hair. He says, “Miss St. Claire, we will be in touch about your sister,” as he opens the door. Getting the hint, I say, 'Thank you for you patience with me, Detective O'Bannon.” I slip him one last sloppy grin before walking calmly out into the police station.

I am glad you guys like my stories. But I need your help. I have decide that the post that people like the best is going to be submitted to a short story publisher. But I can't decide which one to submit. I also wanted to be brave enough to submit one in the first place. So that's why I started here. So thanks, for reading.

I'm glad you guys liked it. I was just bored at the laundry mat and thought it up.

"Ewwww, these clothes stink." I say, as I rifle through the clothes at the base of my bed. I looking for a clean anything to wear. "Maybe we need to go to the laundry mat," you pipe up from the bathroom. I sigh before I admit that you are right, and start packing up the clothes into the laundry basket. "I'll come too," you say, as you come out of the bathroom, toothbrush still in mouth, towel wrapped around your waist. "Not like that you are not," I say as I oggle your hot body, as it walkes around the room bending over to pick up clothes, and tossing them into my basket. You grin, as you catch me oggling your butt. I narrow my eyes at you, as you laugh at me for getting caught. "Go get dressed! Or we will nver get there!" Isay like I am talking to a small child. "Ooooh, is that a threat or a promise," you ask leering suggestively at me. You keep laughing, as I push you back into the bathroom. it's either get your sexy body out of my sight, or jump you. As tempting as that thought is, If I follow through on it, I will never get anything done and you know it. You continue to laugh at me, as I toss in a shirt and pants after you and slam the door. While you are getting dressed, I finally find a clean blouse and a skirt, but they are too small. Also, no matter how hard I look, I could not find a clean bra nor panties. "Hmmm," I say out loud to myself, as I tie the ends of the shirt together, just under my breasts. "This is going to be interesting." I hear a groan of agreement, from the doorway of the bathroom. As I bend over to pull up my skirt, you come over and rub your hard cock against my bare butt. I lean back into you and sigh. Then I quickly snap out of it, and step away. You sigh, as I pull up my skirt. "Come on," I say, as I giggle and step away from you reaching hands. While we are in the elevator, you pull me close to press your big cock into my butt, again. "Wanna fuck in this elevator?" you whisper in my ear. You get a moan for a response. "It won't take much, just a raise of your skirt, then we are there." I arch my back into you, as you start to dry hump my butt. "I've got, a mmmmm.... a better idea. Why don't we do it at the laundry mat? Then.... oh yeah... you can drape me over a vibrating washing machine..... and you can fuck me like.... like that.... mmmmmm," I say getting very excited by the idea, cum already dripping down my thighs at the thought. Intrigued, your only response is to stick your hand in my pussy. Then you take out your hand, and I gasp, as you lick off the wetness one finger at a time. The remaining elevator ride and car ride to the laundry mat, were not quick enough for me. When we get there we rapidly shove our clothes into the washer, not caring about seperating the darks from the lights, and turn the machine on. Instantly, we are in each others arms, kissing frantically, clothes quickly being shed. Thank goodness it's four in the morning, I think to myself, as you raise me up onto the washer. You check with your hand, to see if I am ready, before you say, "Spread your legs, bitch, so I can fuck you with my fat cock." I do as I am told, then you enter my wet pussy, with one thrust of your hard cock. I moan as you start to fuck me, The washer hits the wall behind us with a rhythmic thud, as your pace increases. You grip firmly onto my ass, as I wrap my legs around your hips, "You want it harder, Jodi?" you grunt in between strokes. "Oh yeah! Yeah! Yeah!" I moan, my nails clawing at your back. Just as the washer begins to shake in the spin cycle, you withdraw, taking your cock out completly. You don't even give me a chance to complain, as you pull me off the washer. You, then, turn me around and forcefully push my head down onto the washer, sticking my ass high in the air. Still holding me down, you take the lube out of my purse, and squirt it all over your cock. Then you spread my ass cheecks and put it all over my tight hole. "Hold that ass open for me," you practically growl. I do as I am told, quivering with anticipation. You continue to pin me down dominately, with one hand on my shoulders, and the other holding onto your cock. Slowly, you put the head of your cock into my ass. Then you groan, as you push it in until it is up to the hilt. I start making a keening wail, as you start fucking your cock in and out. Each time you push in, it slams my pussy agianst the vibrating washer, and my pleasure increases with each stroke. You grunt and spank my ass as your pace gets faster. "Oh god! Jack! You are so fucking big! Ah! Yeah!" I moan. My large breasts rub painfully across the metal surface, before you pull my shoulders back towards you, so you can penetrate deeper. Your fingers bite into my shoulders, as you fuck my ass hard. My whole body vibrates with the force you are pounding your cock in and out. Knowing that I am close to cumming, you thrust in deep, and push me until my pussy is smashed hard against the washing machine. The top edge of it, pressed directly on my clit. You hold me there occaisonally pulling our hips back, and pushing them forward again. I scream, as I am finally pushed over the brink into an intense orgasm. You wait until I am done, before pulling out of my ass, and flipping me over again. You push me to my knees to the floor. You groan my name, as you pump your cock towards my face. I open my mouth wide, to catch all of your sweet cum. After you are done shooting all of your hot cum, you rub your softening cock around my face, and in between my large breasts, to pick up any that may have missed my mouth. I lick as much as I can off with delight. Then I lick my fingers taking in as much or your cum, as I can. My meal is interupted by a loud buzzer. The laundry was done. i look up at you from the floor, and say as you help me up, "We have got to do the laundry more often!"

very hot. great job.

great story. Very good writing.

very good. Enjoyed it.

very good. I was right there with you on the edge of my seat. Nice surprise ending.

I'm glad you like them. Trevor has the most because he lives in Austrailia. (Harder to call on the phone.) Thanks for the nice comments.

Very nice, you are becoming one of my favorite writers.

Awsome job! please write more. i felt every thrust like I was there! And I mostly am straight! Very hot hot hot! Whew!!

Very Hot.

Very hot. Good writing.

Thanks, if you like this one you should try reading my other ones. (This one was one of my favorites though.)

I agree with Katprr. It was aswome! Can't wait for the next installment!

Yeah make it a "fun" outing! And don't be afraid of pda's either.

wow that got me seriously wet. Good for you! that was really hot! Wow!

Very sexy. I like your style.