Members krisleightate Posted September 24, 2008 Members Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 In my dream:I see his eyesFire through my sightI feel his handsSoft and lightI taste his lipsSweet as candyI smell his cologneStrong and ManlyI hear his breathSoft and silentIn my reality:I see himA happy sightI feel my bodyTense in frightI taste my lipsRemember my dreamI smell my fearAll that I seemI hear my heartBeating loud© 2008 Kris Tate 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ToyQueen Posted September 24, 2008 Members Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 That is beautiful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members krisleightate Posted September 24, 2008 Author Members Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thanks. I was told it was pornographic on one of my writing sites so I thought " Hey thats great for tootimid" lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members FOS Posted September 24, 2008 Members Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Thanks. I was told it was pornographic on one of my writing sites so I thought " Hey thats great for tootimid" lolI don't think it's pornographic at all- sultry and sensual, definitely. Very, very cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cmwise1 Posted September 24, 2008 Members Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 Kris..I think it is beautiful and sexy...pornographic? WTH? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ladylove Posted September 24, 2008 Members Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 pornographic??? I think it should be rated PG. I think this is a beautiful poem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members sun_flower969 Posted September 24, 2008 Members Report Share Posted September 24, 2008 pornographic??? I think it should be rated PG. I think this is a beautiful poem.I agree! VERY nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members vanilla_bean Posted September 27, 2008 Members Report Share Posted September 27, 2008 Who the heck told you that was pornographic? Sheesh! It's beautiful and easy to relate to. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members littlemissnonamegirl Posted October 22, 2008 Members Report Share Posted October 22, 2008 Wow, really?you are very talented.No way is that past pg. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members triedntru Posted October 22, 2008 Members Report Share Posted October 22, 2008 Gee, guess if the word mouth is in it, that makes it porn!!! LOL!! That was great!! You definitely have some talent!!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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